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10 September 2007 @ 04:44 pm
A Moment at the Sports Festival (Azumanga Daioh)  
Title: A Moment at the Sports Festival
Author: Candyland (candy__chan)
Fandom: Azumanga Daioh: A group of girls (including a ten year old prodigy) go through their high school years with wacky hijinks, thoughtful moments, and…Osaka. Oh, and don’t worry about the strange flying cats. They never hurt anyone.
Wordcount: 419
Taunt: My fandom has an adorable child genius.



Chiyo-chan really gets nervous about the sports festival. Poor kid…she’s so afraid that she’ll be a burden and bring everyone down. But she still keeps trying so hard no matter what.

She doesn’t need to worry so much. I’ll catch up.

Still, as everyone rushes past her, she looks like she wants to either cry or die. Poor Chiyo-chan…

Suddenly, the guy next to me starts laughing. I don’t know him—he’s in one of the other classes. “Come on, what’re you doing? Walking?” He looks so smug. “Are you sure you wanna win? Huh, Class Three?”

What the…how dare he say things like that! Can’t he see how hard Chiyo-chan is trying? She’s running for all she’s worth, trying with everything she’s got in that little body…and he’s mocking her.

He laughs again. “Aww, there ya go! Hang in there! Don’t cry!”

…that’s it. I’ve had it.

Sakaki. The stoic lone wolf. That’s what Kagura called me. But I’m not as cold as so many people seem to think I am. And right now, I’m going to make sure that Chiyo-chan’s effort is not in vain.

She’s getting closer. I pull the sweatband from my forehead and use it to tie back my hair. Don’t want that getting in my way. And I take my position, ready to grab the baton and run like fury. That Guy is already ahead of me, but I can catch up to him. I know I can.

Chiyo-chan is holding the baton out to me. The poor kid has tears in her eyes, and she’s apologizing. Like she’s let me down somehow by not being able to keep up.

The baton touches my palm, and that’s my cue to go. “Don’t worry!” I call as I start running. And I take a certain satisfaction as I breeze past That Guy. Class Three was trying to lose, he said?

Yukari is the anchor for our team. I drop the baton into her hand and let her go. I’ve done all I can.

I’m out of breath now; I wander over to my classmates. Chiyo-chan isn’t crying anymore. She’s cheering Yukari on. She looks happy again; there are none of the tears and sadness that I saw when she was running the race.

And I smile.

We lose the race and come in last in the sports festival. But after it’s over, Chiyo-chan is still smiling.

I guess it’s true what they say. Sometimes, it’s the simple things that are worth protecting the most.

 
 
 
♫ kitsu kitsu kits! ♫: Envykitsuneasika on September 11th, 2007 01:18 am (UTC)
Oh, I loved this! ♥ Azumanga Daioh rocks my world. ^_^
Candyland: Plunniecandyfics on September 11th, 2007 12:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! *loves Azumanga Daioh*
M.O.N.A.: I <3 Youran_mouri82 on September 11th, 2007 03:13 am (UTC)
wibble . . . wibble . . . SQUEE!

This was so sweet and in-character, it made Sakaki-san's 1st person POV really come to life. Great job!
Candyland: Candylandcandyfics on September 11th, 2007 12:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you! ~♥ *glompsnugglesnuggle*

...I want to write more for this series ;o;
M.O.N.A.: Prettyran_mouri82 on September 14th, 2007 10:58 am (UTC)
Psst! Duuuuu eet! XD
Candyland: DC24 [Shinichi]candyfics on September 14th, 2007 11:32 pm (UTC)
... *makes grabby hands for inspiration?* :D
M.O.N.A.: Mmm Toastran_mouri82 on September 15th, 2007 12:15 pm (UTC)
Would you like some ideas? If so:

1) Torture Kaorin? There are several ways to do that, too, be it through Kimura-sensei or Sakaki-san!
--Prompt: beeswax

2) Depict a Tomo-Yomi squabble. Those are always fun . . . and potentially damaging to the classroom. Extras points for a Yukari-Nyamo fight parallel!
--Prompt: pound for pound

3) Anything with Osaka trying to uncover some random factoid about the universe. (Not angst! Seriously, where do fangirls get such ideas?!)
--Prompt: hourglass

Please adapt and do with these as you will! They might even help spark some ideas you have already, I hope. But for that last one, why am I suddenly imagining Osaka with her face all distorted in an hourglass like some kind of clown mirror? o.o

*same icon FTW!*
Candyland: DC24 [Shinichi]candyfics on September 15th, 2007 08:22 pm (UTC)
*same icon again ZOMG*

Honestly, the big problem is getting their characters right. I just know I'll screw up the characterization, and since that's really what most of the show is based on, it would kill any fic I wrote.

...although now I have a really adorable vision of Osaka looking in a fun house mirror and seeing her reflection all distorted :D
M.O.N.A.: Flyran_mouri82 on September 17th, 2007 01:14 am (UTC)
Whenever I worry about characterization, I usually fall back on rereading/rewatching relevant parts of the series and reflecting on what sort of people these characters are. Beyond a reasonable amount of effort doing this, it's time to pick up the pen or start typing. Even a freely written character sketch can get the juices flowing. You're also quite talented, so don't be too hard on yourself, 'kay? (As if I should be giving advice about that. -.-*) Good luck!

Aww, for cute! *thumbs up* ^____^
Candyland: DC07 [Kaito/Aoko: The last thing...]candyfics on September 17th, 2007 01:29 am (UTC)
That's just it, though--I have watched Azumanga Daioh dozens of times. I love the series so much~! If I don't have the characterization to a point where I can write it by now, I don't think I ever will. And one person did actually tell me that this fic was a wee bit OOC, so...while I respect their opinion, it sort of shattered the ol' confidence ^^;;

Yeah, Osaka is just adorable ~♥♥♥ Now it's a matter of whether or not I could actually bring myself to write it when I feel so shaky on the characterizations...