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05 October 2007 @ 09:02 pm
The Letter (Fanfic100)  
Title: The Letter
Fandom: Detective Conan
Characters: Heiji/Kazuha (General series)
Prompt: #2—middles
Word Count: 541 words
Rating: PG
Author's Notes: I do not own Detective Conan. It all belongs to Gosho Aoyama. I simply borrow the characters, tie them up, and dance them around like life-sized puppets. I do wish they’d stop complaining.
Summary: He needed to find the perfect words. Heiji/Kazuha



After years of friendship and months of total denial, Heiji had finally come to terms with the fact that he had managed to fall in love with his best friend somewhere along the road. Somehow, she had managed to get under his skin, and he was grudgingly forced to admit that he couldn’t live without her.

The ahou.

He couldn’t bring himself to tell her this face to face, though. No way, no how. It was embarrassing enough to feel this way in the first place; he didn’t need the added humiliation of her laughing in his face over this. But he wasn’t really a guy who was capable of keeping secrets (as Kudo could well testify), so it had to come out sooner or later in some fashion.

So he decided to write her a letter. That way he could drop it in her mailbox and run…and play dumb if need be. Letter? What letter? I didn’t write you a letter! Must have been those damn ninjas. I tell ya, they’re everywhere…

The real trick was to find the right words and get them down on paper. And Hattori Heiji was certainly not a man known for his great eloquence. So this was proving to be a bit of a challenge. He was doing really well, though! He had a great beginning (Dear Kazuha) and an ending (though he couldn’t decide if he should leave it as just Heiji or make it Love, Heiji). What he lacked was a middle.

The number of crossed-out words and unfinished attempts had already deemed this copy a VERY rough draft, and gave testimony as to how long he had been at this. He thought carefully, then put his pen to the paper once again.

Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day…

Heiji paused, then shook his head and drew a line through what he had just written. Poetry and eloquence (and thinking before he spoke) just weren’t his style. He pondered, then tried again.

We’ve been together for a really long time…

No, that wouldn’t work either. He just wasn’t much of a sentimental person…unless it involved younger versions of himself watching younger versions of Kazuha bounce a ball and sing amidst falling sakura petals. But that was another story for another day.

He needed to find something that really spoke from his heart. Something that reflected his feelings. Something that would tell her what he wanted to tell her, but still stay true to the person he really was. Heiji thought and thought and thought…and finally, the perfect thing came to him. It was exactly what he needed to say.

The pen went back to the paper, and he wrote.

-o-


Kazuha frowned at the envelope. She had come home from school and checked the mail, as usual, and found an envelope in there with her name on it. No stamp, no return address, and no postage mark, which meant that it had probably just been slipped directly into her mailbox.

She flipped it over and pulled the paper from it; unfolding it, she began to read…and her eyes widened.

Dear Kazuha,

You’re hot.


She blinked and looked at the signature—Heiji’s name.

Somehow, that just made all sorts of sense.



PS. This goes out (with massive quantities of love and adoration) to girlquinn, who inspired it. And to everyone else, thanks for reading! Much love to you as well!

 
 
 
Cherelle_Holmes: Fangirlcherelle_holmes on October 6th, 2007 03:16 am (UTC)
*fangirl sight* Heiji is such a romantic... *searches for words* Mh... jerk! XD
But hey! o___o he managed to write her a letter! Thats gotta count for something! *nods*
AND he even gives her a (heiji-ish) compliment!!! *shock*
Candyland: DC02 [Heiji: Girlfriend]candyfics on October 7th, 2007 06:35 am (UTC)
Yes, Heiji certainly is a hopeless romantic at heart, isn't it? ^_~

You could probably write an entire theme challenge on Heiji and his back-handed compliments--you know, the ones that are only real compliments coming from him?

Thanks, hon! :D
Cherelle_Holmes: Heiji 100% Innocent!cherelle_holmes on October 7th, 2007 12:22 pm (UTC)
Oh yeah, certainly! What’s next? Heiji standing under Kazuha’s balcony, singing (in awful Osakan accent) the beautiful heijiish- love song “you’re like a tokoyaki”? ...that's the reason we all love him, right? XD His wonderful ahou-ish charm~

>D I would LOVE to see that challange! Hehe~

*glompelz* your welcomeeeee~ ;)
M.O.N.A.: Make Babies! - Fran_mouri82 on October 7th, 2007 05:17 pm (UTC)
That's perfect!

"Coming in at #1 is Hattori Heiji's first hit single, 'You Are Like a Takoyaki'!"

Now someone has to write this. ^^
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girlquinn: Sokka is big pimpin'.girlquinn on October 6th, 2007 04:29 am (UTC)
OMG, this is frickin' perfect! I didn't think you would actually use the "You're hot" line... but seeing that it's Heiji, who's kinda emotionally challenged, I shouldn't be all that surprised. Spiffy job, my dear!
Candyland: DC10 [Kazuha]candyfics on October 7th, 2007 06:35 am (UTC)
*laugh* YAY! :D It was the "You're hot" line that made me want to write this in the first place ~♥♥♥ Thank you for letting me write this ^___^ LOVES!
Fylifyliwionvilyaer on October 6th, 2007 04:49 am (UTC)
*faceplants* oiy.... that would be Heiji XDXD Very very awesome *g*
Candyland: DC02 [Heiji: Girlfriend]candyfics on October 7th, 2007 06:36 am (UTC)
Thanks! You could write chapters and chapters on Heiji's "compliments" to Kazuha, I think XD
shubbimama: MP: Now the punchline!shubbimama on October 8th, 2007 05:16 am (UTC)
Loves.
Have nothing else to say.
Very sorry, but I have lost all words, only 'loves' came up to my mind (it's very early, I guess that's why)
So... I loves
XD!
Candyland: DC06 [Heiji-Shinichi: Young and aggressicandyfics on October 8th, 2007 02:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! *pats* Drink caffeine, it's good for you! :D
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Candyland: DC15 [Detective and thief]candyfics on October 8th, 2007 02:59 pm (UTC)
Well, I think there was a little bit more to the letter than that. But that's the only part the plunnie (read that as girlquinn) fed me. So that's all that made it onto the paper ^^;;

We all pity Kazuha. Poor kid...

*glomps* Thank you~!! :D
girlquinn: Aang got skillz that killz.girlquinn on October 9th, 2007 05:24 am (UTC)
Dear Kazuha,
You're hot.
--Heiji

PS- Really hot.


:D
magic_truth: Mia and Michaelmagic_truth on October 15th, 2007 08:01 pm (UTC)
Oh Heiji. *facepalm* Not even an 'I like you' after the "You're hot"?
Candyland: Plunniecandyfics on October 15th, 2007 08:38 pm (UTC)
Plunnies tell me that there was more to the letter than that, but they won't tell me what else it said :D

*glomps* YOU LIVE!!