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09 March 2008 @ 05:32 pm
Terms (30 Evil Deeds)  
Title: Terms
Author: Candyland
Fandom: Detective Conan
Bad Guy: Gin
Theme: #26—destiny
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Own Detective Conan, I do not. Own the characters, Gosho Aoyama does. Making money off them, I am not. Borrow and write about them, I merely do. Talk like Yoda, I must.
Summary: Gin faced the Kudo kid in what was surely to be a final showdown.



When he’d learned that the Kudo kid was still alive, it had sent up numerous warning bells in his head. First of all, it meant a failure on his part—he had not eradicated the threat, and now it stood against the Syndicate from hiding. Secondly…Sherry had to have gone somewhere, and the more he thought about it, the more those two dots seemed to connect. Gin was convinced that if he found one, he would find the other.

That had turned out to be incorrect—he found Kudo, but the teen detective refused to divulge the location of the great traitor. Either he was lying, or he genuinely didn’t know where the woman was.

Either way, it made the punk useless.

But the Kudo kid was a fighter, and a damned crafty one, and the resulting chase led them here, to this place overlooking the ocean. The cliffs jutted out jaggedly into the water, and the waves crashed against them with all the power of their fury.

Gin stood with his back to the trees that circled the area.

Kudo stood with his back to the water, his heels at the edge of the precipice.

They faced each other in what was to be, most assuredly, a final showdown.

Gin leveled his gun at the brat. “Time’s up,” he growled, feeling a great rush of satisfaction. He was going to correct his own error, finish what he had started, and eradicate this stupid boy.

To his surprise, Kudo smiled. “I can still beat you, Gin.”

The response intrigued him—the kid certainly had guts. But the statement was patently ridiculous. He was cornered—death was a foregone conclusion. Did he think an army was going to come galloping out of the trees to save him? The idea was laughable. He didn’t have a prayer. “Oh? And how do you intend to do that?”

“By playing the only card I have left,” Kudo’s smile was grim, “and denying you something I know you want.”

Gin cocked the hammer. “You’ve got nothing left.”

“On the contrary,” Kudo replied with surprising calm. He had been standing with his feet shoulder-width apart; now he brought them together in an odd move. “If I’m going to die, Gin…I can do it on my own terms.”

Before Gin could fully process this, Kudo Shinichi bent his knees…and hopped backwards.

Over the edge.

Grasping it at the very last second, Gin moved to the edge of the cliff and watched as the form vanished into the darkness and shadows below. He was claimed and devoured by the crashing waves of the sea.

For a long moment, Gin stood there, staring adown at the churning water. The breeze carried the salty smell of the sea to him; the fragrance was almost overpowering. If only the aroma could be tinged with the smell of blood…

Behind him, Vodka fidgeted nervously.

Taken by a sudden burst of outrage, he gripped his gun and fired a shot down into the water. It was a futile gesture, to say the least—even if the punk had somehow managed to survive the fall (which had to be at least twenty or thirty meters), the chances of that lone bullet finding its mark were nonexistent.

And it didn’t make him feel any better about the situation. He had technically won—Kudo was surely dead. But it did not feel like any sort of victory. He hadn’t actually killed Kudo Shinichi himself, as he had wanted to do.

Kudo Shinichi had killed himself, one final spit in Gin’s eye.

That’s what he had meant about beating him—denying him the joy of the kill by taking the only avenue left to him: suicide. Dying on his own terms, and fleeing to the one place were Gin truly could not reach him, leaving Gin with nothing. He didn’t even have the true pride of the kill to show for it.

It infuriated him.

He had won…but Kudo Shinichi had gotten the last laugh after all.



PS. Quite dark, yes. But I rather liked this idea—ran it by a couple of people to make sure it seemed realistic. And I’m fairly pleased with how it came out. Thanks for reading, all! Much love!

 
 
 
Becamagicbulletgirl on March 9th, 2008 11:58 pm (UTC)
I actually read this as not so dark - must be the mountain dew fizzing in my brain - and so one side of me is cheering and asking "So dude, he lived right? Kudo lived and he'll fight another day? Because nothing would make Gin madder having been given an empty victory and then having even that taken away..."

Another, much more actiony side is asking, "Aww why didn't Kudo find something to grab onto and hide into the ledge and then pull on Gin's leg and bring him down too?"

My logic apologizes that my fizzed up side even got typed out this much and agrees the idea got ficified well *damn even it is infected* ^^
marsdejahthorismarsdejahthoris on March 10th, 2008 02:02 am (UTC)
Yeah, my bunnies were holding up images of Seto Kaiba's escape from Pegasus' goons via apparent "suicide."

Bunnies totally missing the point aside, though, Candy, this is a lovely dark fic, and shows that Shinichi has WAYYY too much knowledge of how Gin thinks. Bravo!
Candyland: DC: Shinichi-Heiji (Young and aggressivecandyfics on March 13th, 2008 04:48 pm (UTC)
Shinichi will climb the cliff while holding a briefcase! *laugh* But yes, thank you! Glad you liked it. And it is sort of scary to think just how much Shinichi could get into Gin's head... >D
Candyland: DC: Haibaracandyfics on March 13th, 2008 04:47 pm (UTC)
Part of me wants to say that yes, Shinichi lived (and possibly put it off to unexplained or supernatural means)...and then he comes back to officially bite Gin...should I do a second part to this? *ponders* The next theme I was going to do could work for it quite nicely...

Shinichi didn't do that because there was nothing. And also because he's not Indiana Jones. And also because then he would technically be a killer himself if he took Gin down with him, and that REALLY goes against his philosophy, ya know?

*snuggles* You so cute~
M.O.N.A.: Bang bang - Cran_mouri82 on March 15th, 2008 10:51 pm (UTC)
The "grabbing Gin's leg" idea sounds kinda nice, actually. It'd be like Holmes and Moriarty going down the falls. ^^

Still, I liked this a lot. When Candy first explained it, I wasn't sure, but the result was smooth, in-character, and calculating. Gin's frustration was priceless.

Great job, girl!
Candyland: DC: Heijicandyfics on March 15th, 2008 11:58 pm (UTC)
Except I don't want Shinichi to have killed someone D: That makes me a sad panda... v_v

Thank you! I know when I first mentioned it to you, you seemed kinda "Ehh..." so I'm really glad you liked it :D *squeezes you*
magic_truth: Nightmagic_truth on March 13th, 2008 03:57 am (UTC)
Surely, Shinichi got away and he lived happily ever after?

No, in all seriousness, this was an excellent idea. A little dark, yes but I loved that Shinichi got the last laugh! It must be killing Gin (ha! If only). I could also see Haibara doing this too, just to keep Gin from getting any pleasure in murdering her...well she kind of did this before, huh?
Candyland: DC: Gincandyfics on March 13th, 2008 04:49 pm (UTC)
Not sure *halo* He might be totally dead! *SHOT*

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it ^__^ And man...I'm really starting to think that this needs a sequel or a follow-up or a second part or something. What do you think, hon?
magic_truthmagic_truth on March 14th, 2008 12:22 am (UTC)
I do think a sequel would be good! Even if Shinichi did not survive it, I think it would be interesting to see what happens afterwards.
M.O.N.A.: High Maintenance - Hran_mouri82 on March 15th, 2008 10:52 pm (UTC)
Actually, I prefer it as a stand-alone. It's conclusive enough, yet leaves an air of mystery. *is always being so difficult* XD
Candyland: DC: Haibaracandyfics on March 15th, 2008 11:59 pm (UTC)
...you're outnumbered here, hon XD I don't know what I'll do yet. But I do have the idea...sort of... >_>;;